Feedback From Last Week Submission

Hi, nice job this week. I’d like to see more from you on the long term consequences of your event. I know you did mention some consequences, but I want to hear about the consequences on through the decades, on up to present day. Thanks.

Essay Progress Check 3
Draft the remainder of the body of your essay; make sure to include the other body paragraphs you have already written. (Don’t worry about writing the conclusion; we’ll get to that in Learning Block Week 8.) Keep in mind the strategies you have learned to construct an effective argument. Refer to your writing plan and feedback from your instructor.

Communicate your message in a way that is tailored to your specific audience. For instance, you could consider your vocabulary, your audience’spotential current knowledge of historical events, or lack thereof, and what is specifically important to the audience.